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My heart hurts so much,
to know that I can't reach you.
What is wrong with me,
what is it that you don't see?

I'd give up my happiness,
to make your day seem bright.
But no matter what I say,
you seem to pull away.

I want to be there for you,
just ask me anything.
I'd listen to your fears,
I'd kiss away your tears.

Why won't you talk to me,
let me view you from inside?
Instead of seeing your heart,
I'm left wondering in the dark.  

I can't keep holding on,
when there's nothing left to grasp.
For though I'm ever yearning,
deep within I'm greatly hurting.  

Goodbye sweet love,
until that day,
when we are meant to be.
  
©2003-2010 ~peppermint981
:iconpeppermint981:

Author's Comments

Wrote this to describe a feeling I've been having....of being unable to reach somebody.

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:iconpreppie16:
I like! :+fav:

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"You and I, we live and die. The world still spins around we don't know why." -Oasis

~preppie16 go on and get your kicks ;)
:iconninthefragile:
nice work... very well written... and very good description... great work...

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"Feel the breath slip away from the lung and let life fly away on its broken wings"
-NINTheFragile-
:iconverchiel:
I like it a lot! :tears: It's so sad! You like someone? I wonder... I hope you will be alright! I hope the best for you!

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[.Ricey.]
:iconenviouspride:
now I can see what boston (longlostone) has been talking about. very nice
:iconpeppermint981:
thanks, your comments mean a lot. :hug: Thanks so much for the favorite!!!
:iconk0i:
Ack, I feel pain reading it, this poem almost reflects my feelings exactly. -jumps up and down- :+fav:
:iconpeppermint981:
Thanks so much :hug: :hug: Suppose you weren't relating to the girl part ;) :hug: Wish you the best, I know how it is, it hurts like heck. :hug:

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