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Hold On
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When the pain becomes so thick,
it fogs the road ahead.
When your heart becomes so crushed,
its strength feels mostly dead.
Take the hand of hope,
and hold on.
When the endlessly flowing tears,
will not heal the scars within.
When you surely begin to fear,
You will never mend.
Take the hand of faith,
And hold on.
When the road you’re traveling,
feels mostly barren and cold.
When your heart is crumbling,
and there’s no one left to hold.,
Take the hand of prayer
and hold on.
When the light ahead is fading,
and you fear you will lose your way.
When the dark is so suffocating,
Its hard to get through the day.
Take the hand of a loved one,
and hold on.
it fogs the road ahead.
When your heart becomes so crushed,
its strength feels mostly dead.
Take the hand of hope,
and hold on.
When the endlessly flowing tears,
will not heal the scars within.
When you surely begin to fear,
You will never mend.
Take the hand of faith,
And hold on.
When the road you’re traveling,
feels mostly barren and cold.
When your heart is crumbling,
and there’s no one left to hold.,
Take the hand of prayer
and hold on.
When the light ahead is fading,
and you fear you will lose your way.
When the dark is so suffocating,
Its hard to get through the day.
Take the hand of a loved one,
and hold on.
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This is an old poem of mine, yet it is one of my favorites. This is one of the first poems I submitted on DA. I'm re-submitting it because not many of you have seen it and I really wanted to know what you think.
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Wow! outstanding , really nice!-Midori